http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r-J7Spa6EJM&feature=youtu.be
This is definitely a rough draft, please bear with me. My story still needs more supporting images (there is a lot of black screen with voice-over that will change) and music. I need to still cut about 30 seconds. I plan to re-record some of the narration and tweak a couple things, but I think its in a good place for some feedback. I am open to any suggestions.
Thanks so much.
Your digital story made me think about.....how my upbringing was very similar to yours.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you might think about changing is....adding more pictures!
The best thing about your digital story is.....your story is interesting and I also had the same feelings of being "uncultured" when growing up.
Your digital story made me think about foods that have been passed through my family. Both my mom and dad have certain foods rich with culture that they enjoy cooking.
ReplyDeleteI think that if you spread some of your pictures out more, you wouldn't have to find so many. I think some of your pictures especially the ones about your grandfather could be spread out to cover more material.
I think the best thing about your story was the emotion you portrayed by using your voice. Excellent story! I really enjoyed it!
Your digital story made me think about.....family. It is so important. And hey - we're both BUCKEYES!
ReplyDeleteOne thing you might think about changing is..... there is too much dead space.
The best thing about your digital story is..... How passionate you are about your family.
Your digital story made me think about.....The importance of family.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you might think about changing is.....You stated that you are working on the black screen.
The best thing about your digital story is.....I loved your narration.
Your digital story made me think about.....family:) and how much I appreciate and love my siblings.
ReplyDeleteOne thing you might think about changing is.....more pictures(no black), which you already stated.
The best thing about your digital story is.....You are a very good story teller!
Your digital story was very nice. I enjoyed it.
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