I focused on the narrative outline and just wrote notes about what images I wanted because I didn't want to spend too much time on it (I tend to get immersed in that part) -this week I will work more on collecting and creating the images I want.
Digital Story Outline
I'm interested in feedback, please let me know if you have any! Thanks!
In the first scene introduce your dramatic question differently.
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i think your focus should be on your self discovery of being a multicultural person of Hungarian and Appalachian decent.
You do a great job portraying your grandmother Hungarian influence. I think you need strengthen your portrayal of your grandfather to better reflect values associated with Appalachian culture. Like love of nature (fishing) individualism (farting in public) ect.
You do a nice job reflecting the Appalachian untrue in your current life style!
the storyboard is due next Sunday and the rough draft is due December 3
Hope these suggestions are helpful!
This is a nice outline. I hope you have been able to find helpful pictures. I feel that pictures make a huge impact and make it easier to explain situations.
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